Hearts To Be won or lost

Hearts To Be won or lost

A Poem by DontBlink158
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I was listening to Jar of Hearts and tis came out..

"

As I watch from above

You're holding your jar of hearts

Slowly adding one more

I'm glad i got away

before you had your chance

My heart was mine and never yours

© 2011 DontBlink158


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Author's Note

DontBlink158
Sorry for grammer/spelling
do you think thats good or should i add more??

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Great poem...love it!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is great! Love the imagery you use to talk about someone stealing hearts and yours you kept. I think this is awesome writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love it!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


That was awesome!!! Your best one yet!!!!! Let me guess, did tessa get u hooked on Jar of Hearts?????? She said she did. This was amazing!!!!! I absolutely loved it!!!! But if I were you I would take out the word "on" in teh 3rd line. Also try to add periods or commas where needed in the poem. But all in all i loved it!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 9, 2011
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DontBlink158
DontBlink158

In the TARDIS!, PA



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