The Nobodies

Shifting in the Shadow's

Lurking in the depth

 

Seeing the things

no one cares to show

 

They have no name

They have no image

 

They are the feeling of being watched

when you're up to no good

 

Everywhere and nowhere

They are the nobodies.

 

Our wrongs

Our rights

 

Our truths

Our lies

 

Nobodies are us

Author's Note

I'm just working on it. I'll most likely change it around or add/drop a few lines. But comments are welcome as always!

Reviews

[Kiari Sabon]

i love it keep up the work

[shadow night]

wow a kind of creeper vibe to it i like it. ^_^ nice deffinatly a good job on the feel and flow

[dreaming dame]

:0 I really lik this. I fought the earge to look over my shoulder just to make sure they aren't here. Now. :) good stuff!

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the way you work on the theme of identity,especially liked the fourth line,had a kind of mischevious effect.Good write.

[Hatchling]

nicely written