Blood Lust

The One....

When you sit there in your chair
I can't help but sit and stare
You look so happy when I stand and walk in your direction
As I put my hands and arms around you to show some affection
The desire to kiss grows larger until we both give in
Then we do and it is passionate without a thought of a sin
We decide to wrap our bodies around one another quickly
Time and space do not exist as you and I become 'we'
It comes so fast, the teeth sink into my neck
I moan in pleasures so deep that I care not of neighbors and think 'what the heck'
Then I sink my teeth into yours as you moan with me a sweet release
A release of passion, love and blood take me to your knees
I finally more backwards as do you
A gentle push, not a shove as we make it through
This next doorway into your bedroom as you guide me with your hand
I can't wait for what comes next, I know you understand
The pleasure that you'll give me and the tastes you leave behind
As we quench our blood lust my dark one
As we begin to live more and forsake the dying
The eyes have locked and the tongue moves up
You can't do anything but not even interrupt
Why would you though as you moan with words
'I love you' is said and then silence is heard
'I love you too' is stated back as I keep moving up
We finally have said it and there's no taking it back
We are face to face now and a stare erupts
You look into my eyes and I into yours
This is a moment that shall never be forgotten nor ignored
We move with one another, bodies grinding together
We climax at the same time and swear to leave each other never
What we have between us is something that can not be broken
As the blood lust turned into love is a permanent notion.

Reviews

[*~Kristy~*]

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED HOW IT BEGAN SO BEAUTIFULLY AND THEN TURNED INTO DARK VAMPIRES BUT REMAINED BEAUTIFUL! I really really liked this poem! I didn't really, however, like the line "I moan in pleasures so deep that I care not of neighbors and think 'what the heck'", but that is only my poem. It rhymed and put oral language into the poem. So, I think that if you kept it it would still be fine, I just IDK I didn't like that line very much... Sorry :(

[StacyPerry]

This poem is actually a dual meaning one. It was never meant to portray a vampire act, but just an act of such closeness and Love that the amount of trust and love given is simply deep enough to run into a blood lust/love and bond between them.

I do like how it was taken by all.....

[GhostWoman]

I agree with Kristy Michelle, that was so freakin' awesome!

[deeps]

This is so amazing! I really enjoyed this write.
I like how powerful the begining is. Then you
slowly backed off. Don't get me wrong I love this
write it's amazing. Powerful and wonderful.
Written so well.

[Ruth]

Keeps the reader interested from start to finish:) Awesome write xx

[Coyote Poetry]

When the desire and hunger is very good. The lust turn into sweet motion and fulfillment that leave the body wanting more. The poem is very good. Description and story made the words come alive. A outstanding poem and story.
Coyote

[StacyPerry]

Please do not apologize for giving me constructive criticism, I take it with a smile.