Walking Dead

For a contest

The moon behind and the stars around,
The woman walks without a sound
She stalks the darkness surrounded by night,
She saw you walking and you are now in her sight
You turn to say hello to her,
She is on top you as if a blur
A bite is taken and she rears her head,
You are filled with pain yet not dead
You are turning into what she has been,
The walking dead who shall do this to someone else once again.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Zombies bite but vampires suck! lol Luckily, this poem does neither...it's pretty cool. The walking dead really do exist but they're only regular people who have been killed, buried and dug up and brought back to life. They move really slow since most of the brain dies when the body does, lack of oxygen causes the brain damage. The trick is done by voodoo practitioners with a drug derived from a puffer fish...the "zombies" are then put to work as slaves on sugar plantations. They have been pronounced dead so nobody ever comes looking for them. This practice was once common in Haiti....pretty awesome huh? The truth is stranger than fiction.

[Coyote Poetry]

The walking dead roam Royal Oak, Mi. once a month. I like this poem. The walking dead is always can create a very good story always. A very good poem.
Coyote

[Black Cat Fever]

I love the darkness in this. I do love a good vampire story or poem and yours is quite chilling I must say. Nicely dark, creepy and terrifying. Perfect.

[Mitch*Dandy]

I like this. This is a very good write for a contest! Hope you win!!

[Aline S. Iniestra]

Awww i loved this poem! Short, concise, descriptive, fast paced ... It is beautiful =)

[Wicahpi]

Scary! lol No warning what so ever,
just a swift attack, a swift bite.
Thank you for entering my Bewitched
contest and good luck!

[Ruth]

To wander with that pain is to know you are still alive! lol
Another wonderful poem love, thought provoking
Really vivid:)
xx