eX Marks The Spot

11-17-2010

eX Marks The Spot
In a world much to bright,
It was you who has shown me light
In a world much to dark,
It was you who has given me that spark
In a world much to cruel,
It was you who has given me a to live by rule;
If there is someone out there who sticks a knife in your back....
Never believe their constant lies or cut them any slack,
Simply walk away from them as they are poison to you....
Know these words and their uselessness will shine through,
Believe the ones that tell you the truth about themselves.....
To hell with those false creatures that claim to love anyone else,
Make sure you know that there is only ONE person there......
For I am the one that love with you shall be shared.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good story in the poem. Easy to fall to the lies. Hard to see a real friend. I like the ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Black Cat Fever]

Be selective about who you hang out with, for they can either make your or break you. It sounds simple but its really not, it effects your whole life.

[JENY]

Very nice…
Meaningful narration of a good theme…
Liked it…..

[Poetic Beauty]

A very emotional poem. It is simply stated and allows the reader to feel the emotions being poured into this piece.

[Ruth]

Know the ones who are true!
Great poem love:)
Always honest emotion in your work
xx