No Inbetweens

I will not give up without a fight,
Know this in your heart tonight
As you lay and slumber deep,
My soul guides you into dreams so sweet
Every time that our lips touch,
A kiss is never asking too much
So know that whomever attempts to break us in two,
Shall feel a wrath like they never knew. 

Copyright 1-27-2011 Stacy Perry

Reviews

[Art]

nice work Stacy...

even brought a smile to my face...

[KatiePie]

This was great ^_^

[Aimee Mahathy]

This is very good! It flowered perfectly. Strong stuff!

[StacyPerry]

Everyone read into this different, this is why I enjoy everyone's opinions.

[Poetic Beauty]

The last two lines show your emotions clearly and just how protective you are of the relationship. I like the display of love and protectiveness in this poem.

[Kelley]

Happy are those who dream dreams and are ready to pay the price to make them come true.
Leon J. Suenes

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!

Is this protective attitude or possessiveness..???

[D S Rollins]

Oooh! I love, that sense of 'No one will break us' in this.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very strong poem. I like the desire to hold and to protect. You made the point loud and clear with this very good poem. We must protect what we care for in a life. A outstanding poem.
Coyote