A Prayer In Hell

A Prayer In Hell

A Poem by StacyPerry
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3-16-2011

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A Prayer In Hell
We sit and say a prayer,
We kneel before our beds
We drive and bless the others,
We give our souls up for a quick little dare

Taking a chance of hope,
Thinking that maybe someone listens
Perhaps it's the only way we get through,
Believing that our prayers get answered is a way to cope

Now even if this sounds evil,
Think about our day to day situations
The karmic ways we get treated in the end,
At times it seems no one hears our cries no matter how loud we scream still

This is why faith is lost so easily by many,
Giving up is the one way that a lot of people know how to do
Can't think of how easy it is to lose faith instead of holding to hope,
Perhaps now you can look at the situation and actually understand and see??

No matter how many hail marries or blessings over us are given,
It seems that at times no one or nothing can listen hard enough to our words
So then we just decide to give up and accept what is coming our way,
People preach to and at us constantly as they tell us WE are the absolute sin

The point of the rhyme above my dear people who still hold a heart not made of coal,
Is a simple one at best
You need to to have hope in something within this world or even within the next,
For if you do not then you've already lost the only thing that matters & that is your soul.

Copyright 3-16-2011 Stacy Perry

© 2011 StacyPerry


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"Can't think of how easy it is to lose faith instead of holding to hope,
Perhaps now you can look at the situation and actually understand and see??"
Wise words in the poem. Easy to fall to the worldly way. But in the end. What will be your reward? I tell people best be kind and help your family and friends. No reward for people who live for the wrong things. A very strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote


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good work

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very candid write

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Can't think of how easy it is to lose faith instead of holding to hope,
Perhaps now you can look at the situation and actually understand and see??"
Wise words in the poem. Easy to fall to the worldly way. But in the end. What will be your reward? I tell people best be kind and help your family and friends. No reward for people who live for the wrong things. A very strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so true and very honestly felt. Empowering and highly motivating.
Beautiful Stacy.. loved it!


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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow Stacy, this is so honest and so insightful. I'll be back to re-read this one when I have more time available.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very NightWish ish lol, very nice loved it allot.

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Really good :)


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Ashtabula, OH



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