Lesson Learned

Lesson Learned

A Poem by Kristin

Pop a pill 
Forget a little
Take a slice
You're cold as ice

Feel the burn
Now you've learned
Fresh scars
Life behind bars

You're living dead
With nothing in your head
Blank stares
And death scared

Nowhere to be found
Deep in the underground
Your soul is lost
Broken and tossed
StainedBlank

© 2012 Kristin


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Wow, nice rhyme scheme and flow, this is wonderful. The image is clear and it is relatable, awesome job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Simple and really relateable. The words are positioned nicely and the concept is fine.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on July 18, 2012
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Kristin
Kristin

Atlanta, GA



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