No one cares

No one cares

A Poem by Kristin

No one cares
Don't you get it
They all take their shares
Until they get every single bit

No one cares
About you I mean
But everybody swears 
That's not what they've seen

Don't you get it?
You're done
No one gives a s**t
And the rest of the world has won. 

© 2012 Kristin



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The poem... good enough. The message... hauntingly familiar.

If you want someone to "care" then you need to (try and) understand that the word means different things to different people. The important thing is what it means to you. So, what does it mean? How do/will you know if someone actually cares about you? Will it change you? Will it change your life? Why was is/was it important to you... to someone else... to anyone? Someone can say they love you and they can hug you, provide for you, fawn all over you but what's the difference between those actions and simply "caring" about someone? Now ask yourself, what is the difference between caring and love?

96 = A (I grade on the curve.) :)

Oh, nice tumblr and wordpress sites! :D


Posted 4 Years Ago


Exactly my views on the world; everything moves forward despite mourning over a loss after a few weeks. Years, if they're unlucky.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Kristin

Atlanta, GA



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