Dance With The Devil

A dance with the devil

On the ground of fate

Steps falling in precision

Right,Right, Left

Right, Right, Left

A stumble in your dance

A obstacle in your day

Break your rhythm

,and wait to feel

The thunder break

Upon your day

A dance with the devil

It is surely

For it may not be your stumble

That breaks the rhythm

For it to be your fate 

To be dented

Reviews

[Onku Ghosh]

lovely poem!! i like the rhythmic beat in the poem "steps falling in precision/right, right, left/right, right, left." Very well done.

[SAGAR]

Very deep and rythmic dance of words . It just seems like dancing with one's own shadow .....

[Tai Ryens]

Ambiguous at best; and that makes this all the more exciting to interpret. Whether you actually refer to a dance with a devil, or a dance with a lover, or even a dance with some random situation in which all is hostile, this was all the more enticing. "Dented." That's not a word I see often associated with this concept; most times I see 'unfortunate,' 'unlucky,' or perhaps even 'scarred,' but dented is one of the more rarer ones. It shows a certain will to proceed onwards despite a rattling by a dance with a 'devil.' Lovely, enticing, and entertaining. Well done, once more, Kristin.

[kublakhan27]

I love the concept and the rhythm of this piece...well done :)