If I could

If I could

A Poem by AMetaphoricalSoul

If I could have one last day with you before it's goodbye
I'd show you the best side of me and I hope I won't cry
If I could somehow be with you just one last time
I'd be who you want me to be

If I could go back and start all over again
I'd treat every second as if it were the end
If I could go back to when it all began
I'd be who you want me to be

I'd spend every moment I could with you
I'd experience each feeling as if it were new
I'd show you the things that you want to see
I'd be who you want me to be

If I could have one last day with you I'd let you know
That I'll love you forever and I'll never let go
If I could have a chance to keep you with me
I'd be who you want me to be

© 2010 AMetaphoricalSoul


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I loved this. Great use of repetition, it really touched me.
Regret it.. something most live with at one point or another, and to portray it so well in such a composed way is just, well to me, stunning.
Beautiful work.
-Cathrine

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on April 5, 2009
Last Updated on February 24, 2010