Beware the Framly of Noobly's Gump

Beware the Framly of Noobly's Gump

A Poem by ALiteRead
"

just silly

"
In Twilly Frills on Noobly's Gump
the Framly is known as Wally Wump.
And Wally feeds the Grimmly worm
bits of scritch and crumbly kirm.

The Grimmly worm was quite a find
Wally almost ate him but changed his mind
now Grimmly worm's a pet of his
so too Grimmly's cousin Liz.

Lizzy slithers smear and drag
with liquid eyes of black nishcrag
leaving trails along the walk
of slimy glosh that smells like plock.

Framlies are a quirky lot
with mogly toes and breath so hot.
Beware of Wally's heated breath
where one small wiff means certain death.

So when you enter Twilly Frills
on Noobly's Gump among the hills
beware of Wally's breath so warm
of Lizzy's slime and the Grimmly worm.

© 2011 ALiteRead


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Haha. That was fun little read.


Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice. Need more be said.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice poem.......

Posted 12 Years Ago


This one was a rare treat to meander through...

Very original and well done!
Chris

Posted 12 Years Ago


An absolutely fantastically fun read! Thank you for this!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A sattirical and moving piece, that reflect almost yearning for laughter, well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


Fantastic use of tongue twisting words. Fun to read!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This makes me smile.. I love the playfulness.. I do try hard to stay away from Wally's breath lol..xx Excellent write..x

Posted 12 Years Ago


While striking some familiar notes, this a unique and thoroughly charming creation worthy of attention.
A fun experience!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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(1953 - Present) Currently a programmer analyst, have never written poetry before. First poem, Tuesday, August 24, 2010. Dropped out of college in '73 to open an art gallery. Only ran the gallery .. more..

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