"At the Mountains of Forever"

"At the Mountains of Forever"

A Poem by Mark

At the mountains of forever, and the seas of evermore,
Lie dreams of future splendor, and tales of ancient lore.

While heroes battle dragons, with maidens by the way,
  No one has a credit card, at least that's what they say.
Not kings, nor queens, nor wizards, have ever seen a 401K,
Little elves and giant lizards have no mortgages to pay.
Bankers and brokers have no place, where fantasies abound,
Politicians just do not deserve to walk such hallowed ground.

Income taxes don't exist in the land of magic swords,
At the mountains of forever, and the seas of evermore.

                                                      
                                                    © 2013 Mark Stitz



© 2013 Mark



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Natural 20 critical hit, loved it. Now I want to play a Table top

Posted 4 Years Ago


Mark

4 Years Ago

Thanks much!
Great poem! I like how you show a relief of modern day challenges in a world of wonder. Good job!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mark

4 Years Ago

Thanks very much.
i imagine this to be about where you are now..

but for some reason, this reminds me of Vermont...we spent our summers up in Ryegate...
THAT is what i miss about living in NY...the summers up there.

your imagery is vast yet sharp.

jacob

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mark

4 Years Ago

Actually I wrote this still living in NY. Thanks for the constructive comments!
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Em
This is great, I really like it

Posted 4 Years Ago


Mark

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
Em

4 Years Ago

You're welcome

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Central mountain range, Puerto Rico



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