After All

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Completely in love,

my emotions follow his heart,

where he knows every shade of me.

my life is made up of

our vows,

and  wandering thoughts of his

breathless touch.

After all,

I envelop the whispering in

every kiss,

the taste that lingers upon

my finger tips,

and eyes that read my

every smile.

Our lives are made up of

one word.

After  all.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Completely in love,

I read the wrinkles on

his face,

and find his heart in the

palm of my hands.

I now wander through the

passing years,

holding callus hands,

where each one tells

a memory.

After all,

our love is mirrored

between once two young souls,

but is stronger with every feeling we hold

in our minds,

every  good time spoken,

and all the passing heart beats

shared.

One word keeps us forever.

After all.

Author's Note

Reviews welcomed!

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

A love story within this
lovely write, from two
young lovers sharing
and caring into aging
a solid love..nice work

[KAREN]

Thank you kindly!

[andrew mitchell]

Nice write, we all share different steps with each other but how beautiful the dance.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Kent Rawski]

Antipathy of this modern world fast paced fast food fast past as in divorced this is one to hold onto

[SheWhoWillNotBeNamed]

Good one! A touching story of a life together.

[Philip Muls]

All the passing heartbeats shared. Very strong.

You succeed in making this a genuine love poem for all couples who stand by their vows.

[Valentine]

Having lost my husband last year I read this beautiful write and want to weep for all I lost when I lost him..Nice write. Kathie

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem and this bond are both pure magic. The understanding that goes
beyond words is what makes it so special. Beautiful.

[KAREN]

Thank you for your kind words!

[Woody]

wonderful tender words. true love will last forever.
reminded me of the Beatles "when I'm 64". you might be too young for the Beatles. check it out on youtube. one of their best :)

lovely poem. I enjoyed the read

[KAREN]

Thank you very much!

[Wórdsmíth]

I like how you pluck the words from the shades of your fluffy heart.

Admirable lines: "our love is mirrored
between once two young souls..."

Nice poem. I`ve seen here the clear pic. of lovers and their love that`s walked together ov`r the life since the birth to an end. Moreover, the title`s full of mystery as well. Nice imagery.

[KAREN]

Thank you so much!

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a sweet story of love that lasts through the years. My 39th wedding anniversary is coming up soon so it meant a lot to me. Love changes, but lasts, if it is real. Lydi**

[KAREN]

Glad you enjoyed!