Once Upon A Time

She once lived in simpler times

gentle peace surrounded her

Space was small

She didn't know who she was

She didn't know where she was

voices seemed far away

But filled with soothing love

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Life was unique

Felt like floating on air

Feelings  she didn't understand

Grew daily

Even then she prayed

To know who she was

And what she would become

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Born into a home of love

Dreams were made

Pride filled eyes stared

She captured many hearts

But still she wondered who she was

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Warmth covered her

Memories were made

Time was precious

Her life was blossoming

But she still wondered who she was

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

She drempt of special days

When life would reveal who she was

What she would become

Where she would wind up

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Twist and turns were her path

Love lit her way

As she grew into a young woman

But once upon a time she still prayed

And wondered who she was

Where this life would take her

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Loner]

Wow !
beautiful emotions and smooth flow of a baby growing up in
adulthood ...

[~Lizzy♬]

Awww! This poem shows the love and precious life of a baby growing up. The care the child gets is so great. Good job! :)

~Lizzy~

[Tina Kline]

Growing up in a loving caring family will go a long ways in teaching her she is a wonderful and much loved person. That will do well as she goes out into the world and faces all the good and bad it offers. Wonderful poem.

[An owl on the moon]

You've created such a strong sense of identity... one who was wrapped in dreams and love from the beginning... and one who seeks her purpose and direction still with wondrous confidence... A loving glimspe of a life.

[Samuel Dickens]

This made me think of my grandaughter, Samantha, who is just six weels old at this writing. Very lovely writing.

[Enigma]

I think its a beautiful poem, full of insgith into a mind that feels the first emtions and recognizes its thoughts. The pictures supplied are really beautiful.

[Shellie]

Its lovely. Really and truly.

[InkSlinger]

a delightful journey, so full of truth and beauty!

[Michael X]

this captures a tender moment beautifully!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

I agree...
Babies are so precious!