PMS.... A Woman's World

For the creative poetry group!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Severe pain cramps a life style

Headaches cover a dizzy soul

Nausea of another month erupts

An antidote of love causes anxiety

Stay away from me!

 

Bloating is worn like a skirt

Every fiber is too tight

Remedies reach out

Supplement of love is offered

Keep away!

 

Hormones spark emotional upsets

Moods change like the seasons

Tears shed beyond the norm

Chronic intense anger roars like the waterfalls

Postcards of love is a stamp away

Leave me alone!

 

Cravings attack the mind

Pepetual denial succumbs a body

Hunger dominates a full stomach

Therapy wrapped in dark chocolate

Melts away some of the insecurities

 

Persistent love covers an unpredictable woman

                  BUT

Blinding pain

Turbulent irritability

Uncontrolable cravings

                 Scream stay away!

Reviews

[Loner]

Excellent write .... loved it.

[Poeticpiers]

sound advice but do you really want to be left alone with your miseries.
At times like this a guy can't win

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Hehe...PMS....some women I know have it endlessly lol
Very fine piece of writing :)

[Berkeley Street Writer]

Sounds like suffering to me. Good writing.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Haha I loved this! Totally truthful and clever write of something that I would say TORMENTS women and one of natures flaws, for us women. Nicely done!

[PerlySunflower]

Give me chocolate NOW!!!! haha
You have penned this down to the teeeeee my friend.
Im sure most women can relate to this.

[Raven Starhawk]

Although this speaks of the other side of life that afflicts every woman I was strangle drawn to it as if I was a alien experience it for the first time. It might not make sense what I wrote but I am at the moment experiencing a brain fart. Still wonderful write.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Wow!

I can relate to this.

Cool picture as well.

[Tina Kline]

This is really well written about a situation that some women suffer through.

[Misty_Prophet]

Truth captured all so well... Great one!