Lucifer's Song

Lucifer's Song

A Poem by Archangel Gabriel

Lucifer's Song.

Contemplate not my innocence

but my honesty.

Do not berate me for my passion

but hold me to account

for the brutality I hold

buried in my tortured soul;

a price I pay for all such

naked exploitation,

and abuse of my Catholic flesh.

And should you dare decry me

I will offer my reply

in a dark satanic verse

who's melody is a shotgun

pointed at your Earth.

So understand,

do not berate me!


© 2013 Archangel Gabriel



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To me...all man made religion know the fear mongering quality of its power....be the self...true to the self...whoever/whatever created us, created us true to our form...like this :) xo

Posted 3 Years Ago


exploitation and abuse of my Catholic flesh. I am not sure why I find that such a fascinating line but I do. Was Lucifer honest or the master of lies? Or did Lucifer just use the right inflection to make the soul lie to itself.
Fascinating poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


well one needs to hold firms to his beliefs no matter the cost it's the pride of your soul :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Archangel Gabriel

3 Years Ago

True, many thanks Peter.
very well written piece as always :) I did wonder at the line
"and abuse of my Catholic flesh."

are you implying Satan is a Catholic creation?

Posted 3 Years Ago


Archangel Gabriel

3 Years Ago

Thank you Mark. I think the Church created lucifer to frighten their flock be it Cotholic or not.
Mark

3 Years Ago

I think the Church certainly defined him. There are references in the Old Testament, but certainly n.. read more
This has a heavy black metal feeling, I bet you like loud music...You write well, perhaps a shade too aggressive at times for me, but you keep to your style !

Posted 3 Years Ago


Archangel Gabriel

3 Years Ago

Thank you Leslie. This is my rant world and you and I know one another in a different universe. Than.. read more
Archangel Gabriel

3 Years Ago

My friend below who has commented is perhaps a connection.
Powerful write as always old friend. Good to see you return.

Posted 3 Years Ago



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