See You In Hell

I hope you read this, you know damn well who you are. Better wake up before it comes true.

 You said you love us dearly,

That you’d take care of us

And keep us safe.

You promised to be trustworthy.

 

You told us this when mom and dad died.

You lied.

 

And you haven’t stopped yet,

Making fresh picked fables

Of wrongs nonexistent,

Place blame where none lies.

 

Unthankful for the friends we have,

Caring for us from their wallets

And supporting the best they can

While you do nothing but point.

 

CAN’T YOU F*****G SEE
IT’S BIGGER THAN WHOSE FAULT!

 

It’s not about money,

We aren’t that twisted.

We care about life

Caring and love.

 

The house we live in has that,

Whereas with you there’s fighting

And piles, nay mountains, of lies

High enough to make “heaven” stink.

 

You claim to be a good Christian,

You must make your god sick.

A hypocrite to the highest degree

Holds no place in heaven, you say.

 

Looks like I’ll be seeing you in hell then.

Reviews

[Natalie C]

Hey John bet you got the desired result of the person it was intended for. Just loved how you ripped him apart saying things just the way you see them and most probably are.

Great flow and your references towards his beliefs and actions stands out like a sore thumb and yet in a very subtle way you urge him to see the situation the way you do, almost in a loving gesture urging him to change his ways

Another enjoyable piece of you, I really loved this!

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

god damn. that was epic. :-D

[Jessica L Auster]

sounds like you have a great amount of hatred for this person, just like I do my grandma.

[CarrieLynn {Chameleon A..]

couldn't have said it better myself...great write babe! :*