Inspiration

A little something for that feeling all artists get.

 

 

You’ve walked into these passages,

Moseyed into the words of poetry.

Your beauty has caused me to write,

Knowing you on a whole new level.

The way we converse grows each time

To newer heights and fuller depths.

Who am I to say no to you?

Your attraction is irresistible,

A presence I long for when you’re gone,

Which I cherish when you are around.

This feeling I have with you feels wonderful,

An experience of life unparalleled.

Your return is such a blessing to me,

For I cannot hold onto such good things in life.

Inspiration, starter of the arts,

Be near as often as you can.

Reviews

[n]

Very inspirational, just as the title reads.
Great writing.

[Larissa G.]

Amen, amen, amen.
I have nothing to add.

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Do you think you can share some inspiration??? My muse apparently jumped off a cliff. :P This is a really great poem and you did a fantastic job. Great write!!!

Heather

[justjenn_2u]

The closure:

Be near as often as you can.

(my favorite line in the poem).

These are words which make a person know how much of an inspiration they are to another. This poem is not only words of inspiration but would also serve as an inspiration to the one you wrote this for.

Well done, nice flow with direct sentences that get your point across well.

[~amanda~]

omg i know exactly how you feel. its funny how many times i have tried to write this same poem and it never comes out the way i planned... you've written the poem for me! it is so perfect... great job

[FoolsGold23]

share some of that inspiration, why doncha, haha my muse has gone AWOL.
in all seriousness, this was a lovely poem. Such a treat when lady inspiration does deign to visit,
at least the certain, awesome few :P. this was a great read, lovely job. (as usual :) )