The Wind Cries Her Name

The Wind Cries Her Name

A Poem by Iota
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A Love Poem

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It took a life time of stepping through

broken pieces of past lovers

left in the wake of mistrust,

lies, deceit, false hearts and forgotten lust

 

The Wind Whispers Their Names

 

Each of us played our roles

as the hero and the foe

never understanding that love

is an education, mastered by the wise

 

God has blessed me with the wisdom

for discerning between a good girl, evil lady,

a bad seed, and a functional woman

A fool doesn’t understand there differences

 

Lord, I have a woman, a real woman

God knows, she is good to me, in every way

she gives me loving, both night and day

I feel like I am the center of her world

 

The Wind Cries Her Name

 

She has me wrapped around her fingers

her foot presses down hard against my soul

I am insane with infatuation of her flirtatious ways

I want to scream out for everyone to hear

 

Instead I hold on to that which is real

anchoring my strong arms, around her waist

together we make invisible snow angels

in the gusting, never ending wind

 

I never knew that love could transcend the physical

reaching deep into my mental and emotional being

If you sit quietly and listen carefully

you can hear the wind crying out her name

 

I can’t breathe without smelling her sexual essence

My skin doesn’t feel without remembering her touch

Her voice I hear, even above my own conciseness

The taste of her skin is sweeter than...

 

sugar, molasses, honey, straw berries and candy yams

Even if mixed together they are lacking the sweetness

that lives in paradise between her shapely legs

She is Aphrodite, a Goddess, my Raven Queen

 

Listen closely, as the wind cries her name  


© 2009 Iota



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It is amazing.
especially the candy yams part. :)
seriously though, it is very passionate and it leaves me longing for those feelings again.

I never knew that love could transcend the physical

reaching deep into my mental and emotional being

That was my favorite part
because those two lines are very honest
because love is a deep rooted thing and i like that you had the words to convey it so accuratly


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I could feel how this 'guy' adores this woman so much...love the part 'i can't breathe without smelling her sexual essence...'
Amazing piece indeed!


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful. It was amazing to read. I really felt the passionate dare i even say love. The last three stanzas were my favorite. Great like always Iota.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the pure emotion in this is nearly overwhelming, I love it. Once again, superb job. =)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The feelings I got while reading this is indescribable. Your words just pull me in with such beauty and passion. It makes me want to scroll up and read this again, because just by reading this it truly shows that you have a beautiful heart.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

just..... beautiful. No other words for it. I'm speechlesss!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such beauty and power in your writing skills. Your words brought me in and held me to your last word. Ending was perfect. You can tell a story.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is amazing.
especially the candy yams part. :)
seriously though, it is very passionate and it leaves me longing for those feelings again.

I never knew that love could transcend the physical

reaching deep into my mental and emotional being

That was my favorite part
because those two lines are very honest
because love is a deep rooted thing and i like that you had the words to convey it so accuratly


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have to say this was a great write! :) i also like they way you organized this as many others do. Its unique to me :) keep up the good work :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The passionate words were amazing in this piece. This was a wonderful read and the words flowed and were very romantically written. Excellent job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Did you throw in candied yams? Now I *know* this woman/goddess is your beginning middle and end in this luscious ode! Your arrangement is devine

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Iota
Iota

Cordova, TN



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