Your Love

Your Love

A Poem by Iota

your different and special in every way imaginable

you love me from my hair follicles to my toe nails

you got me feeling things that aren’t even possible

new worlds through new doors you open like magic


you entice me when you look into my humble soul

your words give me remarkable faith within myself

your love gives me amazing freedom to be just me

and when you touch me, your touch sets me ablaze


when I hold you it feels perfect the way my arms

fit embraced around your waist, I sigh in disbelief

from the memories your scent brings up in me

I take off at warp speed with rapid eye movements


sailing across the cosmos and outer realms of space

I feel the grace of God as I reach up and touch his face

giving thanks because he must have forgiven me

for karma would have never allowed you to love me


I don’t deserve such a love that is so free and living

in my past I have done things that are unforgivable

I just can’t forgive the man that I use to be or

the one that I will never ever really become


how is it possible that true love has found me?

for the first time I can feel life as a breathing being

I can feel the breeze against my exposed face

I can feel you deep down inside me


I can finally feel something besides hate

I feel you loving me in the most beautiful way


© 2010 Iota



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Beautiful. Yes, it's very humbling to have someone love you so completely, and it's a blessing to feel. Sometimes, loving someone like that, or feeling someone's love for you can be the only salvation you have, and when you embrace it fully, you can be swept up and reborn. This is truly wonderful, Iota. It speaks to me and it will speak to anyone who's had a taste of the aphrodisiac elixir that is love

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Indeed True Love conquers all. Another beautiful journey of word pictures. We are all searching.

Posted 7 Months Ago


full of feeling, i love the way you express the message so well.
i really love romance and erotica.
and i strongly agree with kate, nothing can compare with the feeling that love gives you, it can overflow you with numerous amounts of emotions.
well done :) x

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful. Yes, it's very humbling to have someone love you so completely, and it's a blessing to feel. Sometimes, loving someone like that, or feeling someone's love for you can be the only salvation you have, and when you embrace it fully, you can be swept up and reborn. This is truly wonderful, Iota. It speaks to me and it will speak to anyone who's had a taste of the aphrodisiac elixir that is love

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really liked your poem and they way you expressed the appreciation and dismay of being loved.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this poem. It made me smiles when it said you love me from my hair follicles to my toe nails.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The final two lines gave me chills. This was astoundingly breathtaking. It is like that when you find that special someone where the love ignites in all ways. Such splendor in your words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you describe the breathless moment when pieces of a puzzle intersect and in each others curves find the perfect fit~ a passionate love devotional~ =)~

Posted 7 Years Ago


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I don’t deserve such a love that is so free and living

in my past I have done things that are unforgivable

I just can’t forgive the man that I use to be or

the one that I will never ever really become
Those lines reflect the basic goodness of your soul,perhaps it is this that has guided you until now.Cause we are human and we all make our mistakes,our greatness lies in realizing them and the correcting them...perhaps it is this trait in you that has brought you a love of such value.Don't beat yourself down,you deserve everything that is coming to you..



Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a lovely poem. It tugs are our , or my heartstrings.
It is what everyone wishes for.. a love that completes them, fits into that one
jig-saw puzzle piece that seems to be missing within us.
This says all this to me and so much more. Love .. something that should come easily yest is so complex.. Beautiful .. I wuv it!

Chloe

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awww ! I hope that someone appreciates your love and returns it to you. I agree with Neva also. Everyone is wishing and/or searching for a love like this whether they realize it or not.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Iota
Iota

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