Be Still My Beating Heart

Be Still My Beating Heart

A Poem by Sue
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Another poem inspired by Sting but rather relevant at the time.... :)

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Be still my beating heart

As the one much loved draws near

Stop your wild unruly rhythm

As at last he’s here

 

Be still my beating heart

Do not betray your dreams

Lock away your wild emotions

Hold on to self-esteem

 

Be still my beating heart

Can’t let go just yet

Stay away from foolish meetings

Draw away with much regret

 

Be still my beating heart

Your time will come some day

Unlocked and cherished by your owner

No longer kept at bay

© 2015 Sue


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Sue I loved this..
"Be still my beating heart
Do not betray your dreams
Lock away your wild emotions
Hold on to self-esteem"
a very good lesson and thought provoking... enjoyed the rhyme.. shallimarRose

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sue

10 Years Ago

Thank you - am a Shakespeare fan - does it show :)
shallimarRose

10 Years Ago

lol a little...yes..
This is a fantastic write! worthy indeed of prizes, very well written

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sue

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
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This won third prize in a poetry comp with a Shakespearean flavour here on Writer's Café :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on August 16, 2013
Last Updated on February 22, 2015
Tags: romance, love, erotic, fantasy

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Sue
Sue

Southsea, Hampshire, United Kingdom



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