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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Like a Photograph

Like a Photograph

A Poem by Sue
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I was struck by how a photograph remains timeless even though it only takes a moment to capture an image.....

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Enclosed is a memory

A snapshot in time

Forever there freezing

A moment of sublime

 

A loved one is smiling

A birthday treat

Cake and some candles

Family make it complete

 

Baby is happy

Never seems to cry

Locked in childhood

No time passing by

 

Yet such joy released

By paper so thin

No price can be placed

On treasures held within

© 2015 Sue


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I love the concept of this one, Sue. I have never thought about photographs like that, a moment in time captured...
I really loved the first verse stanzas;
Enclosed is a memory
A snapshot in time
Forever there freezing
A moment of sublime
Well penned with a beautiful flow

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sue

10 Years Ago

I think of my memories as snapshots in time and memories often last longer..... thanks Helen :)



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Sue, what a wonderfull way you put such an everyday ordinary thing we all do, only with the passing of time do we apriciate that photograph that took a second to take.
Will

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sue

10 Years Ago

Thanks Will - it's one of my favourite poems :)
I love the concept of this one, Sue. I have never thought about photographs like that, a moment in time captured...
I really loved the first verse stanzas;
Enclosed is a memory
A snapshot in time
Forever there freezing
A moment of sublime
Well penned with a beautiful flow

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sue

10 Years Ago

I think of my memories as snapshots in time and memories often last longer..... thanks Helen :)

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Added on August 20, 2013
Last Updated on February 22, 2015
Tags: photography, family, joy, love

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Sue
Sue

Southsea, Hampshire, United Kingdom



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