He Calls By Night

He Calls By Night

A Poem by Sue
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Part fantasy and part inspired by someone I used to know.... :)

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He calls by night

I hear his voice upon the wind

And as the rain falls gently

Against my window pane

He is there

 

His touch is soft and gentle

I feel his breath upon my face

The warmth of his body close to me

As I lie sleeping at home

In my bed

 

I am forever lost inside him

Deeply embedded is he in my mind

Never again to fear the darkness

He calls by night my dark,

Beloved friend

© 2015 Sue


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I really like this. My favorite line is "deeply embedded is he in my mind". Love this poem I think it is written beautifully.


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sue

8 Years Ago

Thanks Tayler :)
Mixed feelings of imaging the call through the rain and wind. Is a beautiful scene with deep feelings. I love the way you use the atmosphere.

Thanks for share your talent.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sue

9 Years Ago

Thank you Rewel
Much enjoyed nicely written thanks for sharing... :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sue

10 Years Ago

Thank you Mark :)
Sue

9 Years Ago

rats lost Helen's review by mistake!!! Thanks anyway Helen x

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Added on October 5, 2013
Last Updated on February 22, 2015
Tags: love, fantasy

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Sue
Sue

Southsea, Hampshire, United Kingdom



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