Angst

Angst

A Poem by CBH
"

Yeah I don't know

"

You feel the dream like an apocalypse.

The thrill of everything

Turning into nothing

Don’t over stress, they say

Don’t you want to suffer?

Of course I want to suffer

We’re all humans.

That’s what I’m made for.

© 2017 CBH


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I'm by no means suggesting any changes at all. Leave it the way it is. But this is the way I hear what you're saying in a different way. Your point is quite clear. I agree with Chris below. :)

The dream felt like an apocalypse;
everything turning into nothing.
"Must we all suffer," they said
No, I don't want to suffer, I said,
but we're all humans,
isn't that what we're meant for?

100/100

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

CBH

5 Years Ago

I'm very late in my reply, but thank you so much for your interpretation!



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I'm by no means suggesting any changes at all. Leave it the way it is. But this is the way I hear what you're saying in a different way. Your point is quite clear. I agree with Chris below. :)

The dream felt like an apocalypse;
everything turning into nothing.
"Must we all suffer," they said
No, I don't want to suffer, I said,
but we're all humans,
isn't that what we're meant for?

100/100

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

CBH

5 Years Ago

I'm very late in my reply, but thank you so much for your interpretation!
Some truly seek pain to KNOW they are alive...
For others the only difference 'tween pain and pleasure is the intensity of their own response.

TOO many are emotionally numb.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

CBH

5 Years Ago

So true. Thank you for the review.

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