Last Dedication

Last Dedication

A Poem by stars are far


Last Dedication

 

For every tear and every smile

I send for you my heart and soul

For every kiss and hug you gave

I send for you a kiss in the air …

 

For every day I waited for you

And every night I cried over you

For every Minuit I spent on the shore

I send for you a bit of my soul .

 

For every time I said my I love you

And every poem I wrote for you

I say it in my loud voice

You are the one that I want ,it’s true .

 

For every time I said good bye

And every hug that was said to be last

I send a tear full of feelings

And a kiss full of loving ..

 

Sweetheart , I so love you

I miss you as much as I miss air

I miss you as much as I miss freedom

I miss you as much as I can miss ...




© 2012 stars are far



Author's Note

stars are far
I really miss you so much <3 <3 :'(
hope you miss me too :(

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Very nice and I love how a simple poems like these can express so much emotions and thoughts towards a specific person. Very well done :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


Nice love poem - good work.

Posted 10 Months Ago


stars are far

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much :)
I love this one so much and your emotions really come out in this poem

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

stars are far

10 Months Ago

thank you so much :)
WinterIce<3

10 Months Ago

your welcome
"For every Minuit I spent on the shore
I send for you a bit of my soul ."

very poetic words!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Good one.!!!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Tai
It's so sweet, I love it.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice . Heartfelt and emotive.

Posted 11 Months Ago


stars are far

11 Months Ago

Thank you =)
Sami Khalil

11 Months Ago

You are welcome.
aaaawe he deserves ulovely poem

Posted 11 Months Ago


stars are far

11 Months Ago

Thank you a llot :)
Team_Jaward_Gale

11 Months Ago

Welcome
Awesome, he sure is so lucky to have someone like you....
sooo sweet, and he won't help but be moved by this lovely piece :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


stars are far

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much :)
I Like this :) Well done, not really anything I can say bad about it :D

Posted 11 Months Ago


stars are far

11 Months Ago

Thank u

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Added on July 23, 2012
Last Updated on July 23, 2012
Tags: My Love <3, i miss you

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Tyre, Lebanon



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