Did I Mention That I Love You ?

Did I mention that I love you?

 

I walked by the trees as you were staring at me

Leaving you behind my sight, not minding for thee.

My heart trembles as I look back at you

My eyes tear, and my soul feel like renew.

 

As I turn my way, and head back to my heart

My soul runs faster than me ,and hit you like a dart.

I gaze at your eyes as my body shivers

From love, warmth and your tenderness.

 

You turned your face to the sea sight as I arrived

I stared at your back as if I ,for long time, had strived.

You look back at me , and with a whisper in your ear I flew

Did I mention that I really love you ?

Author's Note

I was inspired by the movie "love Actually"
Hope you like it <3

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Again, a passionate piece from you and I particularly like the sense of wonder and having been blown off their feet that your speaker feels as their lover turned back to remind them of the love they shared together. Well done!

[Kasey Miriam]

Very sweet and endearing. Wonderful poem

[Anahat]

aahh...a beautiful one :)

[MsJewel]

I've never seen the movie, but your poem is lovely!

:) Julie

[Ayushi]

Very nice depiction of emotions..
"As I turn my way, and head back to my heart
My soul runs faster than me ,and hit you like a dart."
Great lines..
And Love Actually is a great movie :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the matter-of-fact title..good job

[Einstein Noodle]

honest emotion .. have not seen the movie ... are there explosions and fighting in it??
just kidding .. keep expressing Stars are Far! i always wish i were multi lingual so i can read in original texts ... always something lost in translations ..
E.

[stars are far]

haha no explosion just love love love haha, thank you so much.
and hey english is my second language, so sometimes i just use some verbs wrongly :/
Thank you Einstien :)

[wordman]

a beautiful write and a great movie did I mention a great write