Amnesia 2

I just want to have a one day break, 

Where i don’t think and i don’t feel

I leave home at 6 am, go to anywhere new

Far place, natural, alone with my camera.

I want to stay offline from these terms

Where you feel that you are committed to a phone

And the center of your life is Wi-Fi.

I just want to escape all those bounds

Don’t care who sees me or who like my picture

Don’t wait for any comments and no seduction intended

I just want to go for a far place, alone

Run, jump, dance, and sing out loud

With no one to call me crazy or bizzar

To tell me that I’m being bad and a s**t like 

I don’t want to be judged, i just want to feel free

Free from everything, even people's thoughts

I want to see everything, but not his eyes,

I want to have a free mind just like a free verse,

I want to come back home at12 am with no fear of the darkness

I don’t want to fear kidnapping and thieves at night,

Or even facing drunken people that try to kiss me

I just want to have one day out, 

With a million cup of juice and a trillion bar of chocolate

I just want to be my unconscious, not bound in my morals.

I want to come tired, sleepy, and speechless from happiness

I don’t want to have the power to change my cloths

I just want to sleep for days after that day

And when I wake up that day I wish that I wake up with Amnesia...

And start a new life, and that would be the first day...

Author's Note

A continuation for Amnesia 1... free write.. hope you like

Reviews

[cycy]

I don’t want to be judged, i just want to feel free

Free from everything, even people's thoughts

deep down this is wat we all really desire dear to just be the real us with noone to judge us and nothing to be weighed up against, well written indeed kudos

[Khyati]

Or even (add 'fear' here) facing drunken people that try to kiss me.
^_^ As lovely as every honey! Even I wish I could do so.. :(
My fav line is..
With a million cup of juice and a trillion bar of chocolate

[armin]

nicely penned, flowed really well. It reminded of one republic's song Good life. This was quite great than the Amnesia1. Keep it up.

[stars are far]

it as inspired by the song "amnesia" by 5 seconds of summer :)

[armin]

Oh ,but haven't heard that song. I don't enjoy 5 seconds of summer. I think one republic is the best rock group.

[stars are far]

they are not my best either, but I do love this song, its quite inspiring for me..

[Leslie Philibert]

Great tempo, the right tense, fine job..

[hardeep sabharwal]

A good work, the place you want you can find it in your heart I feel so, going to read its first part

[kate]

wonderfully written! very expressive!

[Alex Boyd]

Once again beautiful and deep

[R Smith]

another brilliant write Suhad, i'd like to share that day too, it would be a happy time i'm sure :)

[wordman]

well i hope you find this place,it starts in the heart