It's You Moe

It’s You Moe!

 

When the tides dance with the moon beams every night

Someone in my heart awakens and makes me enjoy the scene.

Every time a shooting star passes through the earth and knocks my door

I wish for something and someone grow up in my heart.

All of the love songs I listen to, contain the truth of my soul

For, it has the fragrance of someone that means the world to me.

Within all the Greece goddess I know there is someone alive

Someone to wish for and live to love them way more they breathe.

Each love myth contains the dough that his soul was made of

Forever, he is the one and the only soul that will make me bend.

So please listen MY MOE, I love you, forever, and always

And for beyond our bodies will live and call for one more hope.

I will keep loving you, for all the lives I will live and so much more. 

All what I ask for, is to me mine, just for one more time. 

Author's Note

I dont like this one, but Im actually bored, that is why I'm publishing this.
photo taken by me, I know it doesnt relate to the poem, but i liked it :)

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

Suhad, it's really a great poem. I had just read about you and it feels like we are related. Most of the things are similar within us, one way or the other. I will let you know along with time.. Although I am younger to you, I feel free and glad talking to you. Believe me, when I read about you, I felt like you're my bestie, don't know why....
About your poem, it's very good, a good time reading. I could even relate to the pic. The two large rocks within the sea seem as you and the one for whom you've written this poem.. as u both aren't together... loved the work....
By the way, I too aspire to be a well known writer in future. I owe a lot to my dad and also my bestie for making me feel good with the way I am...
keep writing...
Anindita : )

[Anahat]

Direct from your heart to mine!
Amazing write! And also beautiful picha :)

[R Smith]

well written Suhad, I think its time Moe saw the light and gave in to your heart, you wrote him a beautiful poem :)

[Saddam]

Every time a shooting star passes through the earth and knocks my door
I wish for something and someone grow up in my heart.

Beautiful and heart touching. Love this.

[cycy]

wow, the poem is good and the photo is absolutely beautiful and breathtaking wish i had such a view..love love love it

[nazia]

Its beautiful and the picture adds serenity to the piece. loving someone unconditionally is a something very few people are able to do. Your write makes you one of those few. Nice job :)

[Rana]

A beautiful poem filled with so much of real love that it makes one go 'aw'. "Someone in my heart awakens and makes me enjoy the scene" do u realize how amazing and skilfully composed the line is. Great job. Only thing, i feel it should be "passes through the sky" rather than "passes through the earth" in the next line. And the photography is wonderful.

[wordman]

and I like it too,and it is a great poem it`s you pouring out your heart