Left Alone

Left Alone

A Poem by stars are far

They claim there is nothing left to say and then they walk away

They believe that you will be fine and you will not cry every day.

They stab you in the back and hide in the life’s hay.

But what’s the point when you are not seen anyway.

 

You cry yourself to sleep and you don’t know what to do.

You look at your phone and avoid texting “I miss you”.

You pull your soul up in the air with no crew

Then you hide your face under the pillow and go into the blue.

 

Next morning you open your eyes to see the whole world

It’s bright, kind and warm but your soul is so cold.

You look at their picture and smile but still look so bold.

You whisper to yourself that you are strong, and it’s the best word. 


© 2017 stars are far



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stars are far
I haven't published anything in ages. Not my best

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Very relatable indeed!! and it may not be your best, so you say, but it has amazing potential. The imagery is profound, the emotion is strong - it's all fantastic to the point where you only fall flat on occasion with your musicality. With a good musicality, you would attain perfection for this. Well done!

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Very relatable indeed!! and it may not be your best, so you say, but it has amazing potential. The imagery is profound, the emotion is strong - it's all fantastic to the point where you only fall flat on occasion with your musicality. With a good musicality, you would attain perfection for this. Well done!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i wonder how many people can relate to this great write

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very relatable read, well done :) x

Posted 4 Months Ago


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Zoe
Many can relate to it. I could feel the emotions behind these words...telling yourself again and again, reassuring ourselves that we are strong enough..It does help us, but has its own drawbacks. Well worded...A job well done!

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