My jerky nerd

My jerky nerd

A Poem by stars are far

I always see your shadow

My beloved during sunset

From along distance..

 

I imagine you

Green eyed.. Black hair...

Caring person, Unselfish ...

 

One day

I decided to get closer

I got closer and closer

You were

Brown eyed..Black haired

And what i always hated

you were a nerd

you were a jerk

that never cared

and every time

he pass during sunset

he only gives me a look

not even a wave or smile

You are a jerky nerd ...

 

but i could tell you now

My jerky nerd

"i adore you"

28/7/2011
4:32 AM 

© 2011 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
i thought about this while i was thinking about my love

enjoy :)

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Gooooooooooooood

Posted 12 Years Ago


aaaaaw!!!! really cute and sweet !:) love it !:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very amusing, you make people think... we think wrong and then smile. Well done.
*bird*

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was sweet and funny. I loved it.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very clever and entertaining to read!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is fantastic, from the super title to the way the poem describes the scene with a splash of humour is fantastic :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


[send message][befriend] Subscribe
EMF
So sweet. And so funny. I loved it

Posted 12 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

177 Views
8 Reviews
Rating
Added on July 28, 2011
Last Updated on July 28, 2011

Author

stars are far
stars are far

Tyre, Lebanon



About
you get to meet the real me within my writings. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..