The way

The way

A Poem by stars are far

Look.. Smile.. wink

                       Say sweet words

Speak the following words :

           “ I love you “

You will hear back :

        “ I love you too”

Marry ..

  Have kids

And now you can die restly ..

Having all your dreams  come true

And Owning your love/wife/husband

By a look …

© 2011 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
Dedicated for my true dream..love ~s~

Hoe you all like this and if he read this i hope you love this ...
and enjoy reading this :)

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Very sweet

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awwwee, any response from ~s~ so far, tell us pls xxoxo♥♥♥♥♥

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Sorry Suhad, same old problem with my eye's.

Posted 12 Years Ago


aaaaw!! thsi is really sweet !:) i love it !:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


A 'colourful' write.
*bird*

Posted 12 Years Ago


I liked it. Its its simple beautiful way, it compressed the meaning of a life lived full sharing it with a young one. Nice font and use of colours as well. I love the last two lines. :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Go, Suhad! You can definitely fight for it!
True love is just THIS! THIS piece! :)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the font and colour...but you could design it to a certin gender, 'cause the slashes always get me confused

Writing keeps the dream alive
~V~

Posted 12 Years Ago


i love the different colors and over all this is just a realy good poem

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on August 26, 2011
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Tyre, Lebanon



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