Believe in me

Believe in me

 

I could be a writer

And insult you by my words

Or make you above the clouds .

But you should just believe in me

Why you don’t ??

 

I could heal my beloved

And make him better than Romio

Why don’t you believe that I can do that ??

 

I could stare at the trees

And make them beg under your knees

To pass through and give a look ..

Do you believe in that ?

 

I could stand on the mountains

And itch your name on the stone

I’m strong, believe in me !!

 

I could draw your picture on the clouds

And make you like Pope and famous bands

Believe in that !

 

I could enter your night meres

And make you a king in a wide kingdom

I could turn your night mere to the best dream

Believe me !!

 

I could go back to history

And make you like Romio and Juliet

I could make you like Marten luther king

Just believe in me !!

 

I could do whatever you want

I could be whoever you want

I just want you

To believe in me !!!

 

4/9/2011

4:20 PM

Reviews

[Lively]

Cool! One of the power of only an artist have.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Beautiful poem.

[Thrinna Mae]

Nice piece of writing, Suhad...The repetition of "I could" gives a great impact... :)))

[Brenda:)]

hummn nice !:) amazing poem !:)

[Enigmatic Soul]

Wow. That was yet another wonderful poetry. I loved the structure. It was unique and beautiful. I flowed along easily with the idea of achieving so many things for a loved one. A few errors here and there, but no worries. U can always go back to them. :)

[Sunni Davis]

I definitely believe! You have a wonderful talent for words.

[EMF]

Nice work. Real nice work

[smarie]

Never stop writing because you are filled with potential, i love reading your work.

[Roxi L]

Nicely done.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~V~

[Lily Mae]

Nicely done :) x