ME

I’m a normal person

Who have dreams

Who imagine he is great

And he is the center of the earth ..

 

I’m a normal person

Who had her heart broken

And her dreams stopped

And her tears shaded …

 

I’m a normal person

Who looked for love

Under the ground

And above the clouds …

 

I’m a normal person

Who wants to be free

From the prison of life

And from the words of enemies…

 

I’m a normal person

Who would sing that song

Of love and break up …

 

I’m a normal person

Writing on writers café

Who would sleep

And wake up at the mid of the night

And have a question :

“how many reviews I got ?”

Not like some people

“how many fans I got ?”

 

I’m a normal person

Who have friends and enemies

With a great friend and sis

That would never leave me alone

She loves me, I love her too..

 

I’m a normal person

Who would travel all over the world

To find

The truth, the safety, the passion

To find

The friend, the love ..

 

I’m a normal person

That you can report in your lives

Her heart is broken

By the sweetest hummer in the world

And joined

By the safetest glue in the world

His hand ;)

Author's Note

i was describing me in this :DD

so what do you thik about me ?
if anything changed i will add it :D

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Wow, this is so nice and does poetically describe you as a person so elegently with passion and truth.... truly magnificent piece of work...and just how great is the last stanza for pure poetism....but well you may think you are normal but for me amazing etc would describe you better :)

[Senseless whatever]

Beautiful.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Classy..!!!

[gogi7]

very good job...
I’m a normal person
Who would travel all over the world
To find
The truth, the safety, the passion
To find
The friend, the love ..
is fav part.... well done :)

[Thea]

Of course, you're normal, oh my, you can't be abnormal, don't tell me... XD
You're such a nice friend...Like this poem... :)))

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Very nice poem.

Great piece. Honest and straight as an arrow. I read this as two poems. The first simple and direct. A picture of you. The second half more of the 'internal' you.

[ShameemAkhtar]

My favourite piece:

"I’m a normal person
Who looked for love
Under the ground
And above the clouds …"

There is a good flow in the flow, you show your strength and how to aspire to greatness, then yet you show your fragility and humbleness

Enjoyed it

[M.Babu]

"I’m a normal person
Who looked for love
Under the ground
And above the clouds …"
This pretty much won me over :)

Nice :D

~M.Babu~

[Dark Beauty]

Loved this piece,thanks for sharing apart of your self,great write!!

[Inyourshadow]

Love it as I always say I love honesty, this so speaks from the soul so never mind what others think as the only person you need to love you IS you. Keep em' coming