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We have reached too far by this

You must leave and forget

And I should walk and ignore ...

 

Our meeting from beginning was wrong

We changed in some months

And our relation become so strong

Our love grew up fastly

So as our dreams ...

 

This is why I must leave

And make your life as it was before me

And I'm sure you'd be better  this way

I will just go

And leave you. I’m sorry ...

 

But hey, look at the bright side

You will be again free

As you used to say

"I'm happily single "

You will re-be

 

And man,

Sorry for being dreamy

But I thought that I own you

For now I must say" move on "

And I will too ...

 

Just look beside you

You'll find her

Who loves you really

Not like me ...

 

If you want to be good with me

Be with her now

And I will be okay .

For now,

I must say Goodbye ...

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

I do.Great two lines If you want to be good with me,Be with her now.It´s the kind
of poem I like,honest and lyrically strong.Good work.

[god is not great, I am]

simply, lovely.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good shot..!!

[Andrea Vargas]

I did like it, very much... I enjoyed the content and i really like your format on this poem (:

[smarie]

This poem had a really nice flow.

[Ashley Brodber]

I felt a shady sorrowful yet bittersweet feeling to this poem. At first it had me sad bcz he seems 2 really have loved her but then she feels guilty for not loving him as much as someone else could. I love it bt it still makes me sad 2 see lovers part ways.

[Desmund Tiny]

no one can go back in the past and change everything but we can start a new one and make anew happy ending.... very nice work

[Suzy Q]

This was very well written. I actually went through sort of the same situation not too long ago. Although I was the one on the other end. But, my feelings were very similar to these even if I wasn't the one doing the heart breaking. So I can relate to this very much and it's great :)

[Leon R]

You have very beautiful style. I like the way you choose your words and manage to say exactly what you want to say. Or at least so it seems. Very good write!!

[Walk away slow poet]

Such a beuatiful amazing write!