Please ..Be For Me

Please ..Be For Me

 

My heart want to speak

I want you to be unique

And never be freak

And try to give me a real peak …

 

I’m here alone walking between the trains

Looking for  you and on my head it rains

I feel the coldness moving between my veins

But your love is killing me with its chains…

 

I want to be feeling so fee

Will you come now with me

And let us forget the tree

That you let me under. Do you agree ?

 

There is nothing to say anymore

Here is my pen moving and knocking on your door

Will you open this time, or let me stay on the floor

Please baby .. Today let me score my last goal …

 

14/2/2012

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Let me score my last goal...
Nice

[emman]

nice poem :) great! I'll read it again because I like it :)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good write..!!

[Jeremy Baker]

Nice imagery here.

[Brenda:)]

aaaaaw:) ! another amaizng poem :)

[Bidu Ibrahim]

Beautiful piece!

[paradise]

I realy love this keep on writing you have great pieces

[Warren L.G De Mills]

cool piece. Fun easy going rhyme scheme. A simple piece. Verse 2 stands out though, it is better than the rest honestly. Keep writing

[The Cobra Lounge]

Lots of rhyme and meter in this poem. A very enjoyable read sweetie.

Muse

[Senseless whatever]

Awesome. I got the whole rushed, eager, ready to dance kinda feeling from this.