All I Want

All i want is one night.
All i want is to be held tight.

All i want is to love You.
All i want is to be with You.

All i want only involves us two.
All i want is to not to wake up without You.

All i want is My Love.
All i want is my Turtle Dove.

Reviews

[Shelby Baker]

Short, simple, but great! I love it. paints the picture of what you want and just a nice write.

[Pester D. Finches]

very sweet, sad and short, i do think if you broke out of repeating the same line opener, you could take you're writing to the next level. i would be intrested to know what you think of my poems - pester

[Akasha]

Aw. It's cute and short and sweet.