Poem of Earth

This is a poem about Earth and how it should be respected

        Oh, should I know, the, the, the true beauty of Earth,

        Plants and Animals, should you know, what they do,

        The, Earth, Earth, Earth loves them, just as it, it, it loves us,

        Water, the exotic color, as water, water, water got no color,

        Can't, can't, can't we just live, live in unity, unity for nature,

        Government, you gotta know, you gotta, they won't do all,

        As, as, as we are citizens of Earth, Earth, Earth, our planet,

        

        The, the, the trash we throw, do, do , do you know, it will flow,

        And as it flows, we will show, the brow, that, that is getting low,

        Garbage, you got to know, that we should not, never, overflow,

        We, we, we can overthrow, our own bad, our own bad deeds, low,

        

       What have we done, have we ruined our, our, our own planet,

       We speak utter nonsense, nonsense you know, we say, as,

       Don't speak nonsense, don't say, we can go to space, that is enough,

       Even if such, even if such is true, should we not try to help our world,

       In, in the other lands, we shall be treated, as third class, third class you know,

       At all needs, we should, at even our own deaths, keep the, the Earth,

       Doesn't matter, whether you White Black or Brown, in the end, we are one

       

       Unity, Equality, these 2, we shall all need, they keep us one,

       Peace, Devotion, with these, an, an Individual has purity in his or her heart,

       Don't need nonviolence, because, how would stability be made,

       Peace and nonviolence are differed, they have their own concepts,

      

       All we need, All we need, is to come together, as, as world citizens,

       When we care for mother Earth, let, lets realize the little things, as we have,

       Sometimes, we forget about the little gifts, as we are geting greedy, to have,

       Always remember, that Peace can be obtained, through sport like wrestling, 

       Peace is the love and compassion from heart, nothing else,

       I request, that you, you should appreciate all as one, and one is all,

       I, I, I promise that if none desire our Earth, I would, I would do a protection plan,

         

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Emily]

Just like some of your other things I read, it sounds like a song. c:

[Sukhmeet Singh]

Does that mean it was good or not

[Emily]

It's good. Believe me. It's good. c:

[Sukhmeet Singh]

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[Pax]

Nice! nature is crying for help...and not everyone hears it....but you did...
Nice work...the comma is a bit refreshing...like a haunting echos...

[Sukhmeet Singh]

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[Baby Ricochet]

GReat Job!

[Sukhmeet Singh]

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[Ahmad Cox]

Beautiful ode to nature. This was amazing.

[Sukhmeet Singh]

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