He is Perfect

He holds her gently,

securely,

in his protective arms.

He caresses her caringly,

never selfishly.

He looks at her

tenderly

with his

emerald eyes.

He kisses her ever so

softly,

as if her lips

are made of glass

and he’s afraid

they will break.

He respects her,

loves her for

who she is,

never stepping

out of line.

She loves him.

 

Reviews

[C.A. Lucas]

I love this. It's very soft and romantic. It makes we want to be gentle with every body :) It makes me want men to be like this in real life ;-)

[writingcrazy55555]

Yes that would make the world a lot better :)

[prepre1007]

This is good. Well done. Your a great poet.

[writingcrazy55555]

Thanks prepre!

[Santiago Veracruz]

It's interesting. It clashes with my perception of love and I can respect that.

[Jordan Easley]

sweet poem. I liked it. It was refreshing to read about someone truly in love. It made me feel like there was still hope in the world :) Good job.

[writingcrazy55555]

Thank you!

[diggitydawg]

awww cute

[writingcrazy55555]

Thank you