Coming for you

Coming for you

A Poem by Carlee
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Creepy~ ish

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Know this.

 

As surely as you hear their claws on the walls;

Their teeth gnawing through all your man made protection,

Voices whispering in your ear telling you things you can't decipher.

 

Know this.

 

Surely as you hear all these things, you see the shadows move;

See toothy grins  that aren't joined with the eyes that they belong too,

Your eyes can barely track the skirting movement about the room.

 

Know this.

 

As surely as you feel them--

Feel their breathe on your skin,

Feel the wounds they left on you,

Feel their poison swimming through your blood.

 

Know this.

 

They're coming for you.

© 2008 Carlee


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You got the fear stirring in me! Good job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is scary!

You've definitely done a wonderful job here. Thumb up!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, that's just great; I sure as hell won't sleep tonight now! Thanks for the sharing that! :)
Great write, truly!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 13, 2008
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Carlee
Carlee

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