The Poetry Soldier

The Poetry Soldier

A Poem by Kena SunGoddess Dawn
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A very passionate poem in a spoken word style...

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The Poetry Soldier

 

Memories boil to the surface,

toxic to a crippled mind.

Gathering bits and pieces of what's left of her

from the explosion of her fragility…

never once heeding to the advice of others 

to watch out for warfare,

she got caught up as a militant...

Blindly running across valley's,

bleeding tears of defeat,

searching for solace in the moon,

but not resisting the scorching hot sun

which blistered her once smooth soul...

 

The journey led her right back to home,

a new discovery emerging

as her pain glided effortlessly across the pages

of a free therapy canvas,

passion drumming incessantly on a keyboard.

Her hands a separate entity

from her fiery eyes,

which gazed forward

into a portal where her anger

sent shockwaves through his bones, tissue,

and muscles, which make up the totality

of only flesh and physicality,

absent of substance.

 

Papers are tossed,

mixed with tears and regurgitation of

the past which created malaise

to the sheltered woman who had inhabited her...

who had been cracked open...

spilling her yolk, which was devoured with

voracity, and then spit out.

His face is etched across the pages.

Each stanza is his eye gazing--

and she smiles because he is locked

in her imagination, the power surging

through her pen.

Her sigh is his breath releasing meaning

to each literary attempt to purge

the swords that have cut her insides.

 

Yet who is she?

Who is he?

He came inside so fast,

sending her across miles and valleys

and land mines, and the deepest trenches,

just to wind up home,

seeking to patch up cuts and bruises with words,

bathing in the gift of self expression,

wonder caressing her skin...

 

Yet who was she?

The evening of self-discovery dawned on her

the night rain pelted down,

and the moon shone high.

As she stepped into the unknown room,

she met the microphone which aimed

at her hesitating lips.

The flickering flames from the candlelight

coincided with the fiery passion

they held inside them…

They all cheer, they want to her to pour

out her soul.

She recites her rhyme,

handing out her wealth to desperate souls,

being a victim of poverty so long,

her stomach ached with hunger for love,

scraping her identity off the ground like handouts,

she expressed herself freely...

Hands come together in applause,

her heart had been exposed,

and she says one last cry to the

face etched in her mind,

the one who set up the battlegrounds of her

bloody war:

 

Thank you.

I know who I am.

Although you took me through the depths of hell,

you made me who I am...

Who am I?

A soldier!

One who is stronger and wiser because of you,

able to turn your weapons into my muse

for everyone to meditate upon...

a positive reincarnation.

Somewhere you are cowering, while I stand tall,

my spine rigid, my tongue sharp,

the applause loud,

and it's all because of you.

So once again, I thank you.

 

For making me a Poetry Soldier...

 

by Kena SunGoddess Dawn

 



© 2010 Kena SunGoddess Dawn



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Author's Note

Kena SunGoddess Dawn
I finally finished publising my book!!! This is the headlining poem. It was probably the one poem that got the most popularity on my page, as well as was one of my favorites. I was inspired to write it after I attended spoken word in seattle. It's the basis of my book. We've all been through war; with relationships, love, life in general, and writing is the armor that gets us through...and after it all we come out alive, and stronger than before...

my book is:

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I was greatly reminded of the song 'Thank you' by Jamelia whilst reading this. Do you know the one? There was one line in particular which stood out for me..

Thank you.

I know who I am.

Although you took me through the depths of hell,

you made me who I am...

Them lines.... thank you for taking me to hell i have discovered 'Me'...i like that idea. It was also your phrases..as spoken word it really stood out as there can be a difference in reading something and speaking it but you made it simple with choice of words but powerful with the ones you chose. Hope that helps...not meant to be a contradiction !

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The only bit of this poem I could say I mildly liked was the last stanza. The rest of the poem is just confusing and very difficult to keep one's thoughts going on a straight path. You have got the tools to express your emotions, but your ideas are all mixed up, and you ultimately lose the interest of your reader, which is vital. I would consider revising this poem, possibly making it shorter and encircling all the ideas you have presented here (in no particular order) around one main theme.

Luke

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

who had been cracked open...
spilling her yolk, which was devoured with
voracity, and then spit out.

Crisp words escape their lips despite
speaking of stale moments.

love the metaphor of an egg to the woman. You've got the ability to create creative wordplay. I'd love to hear you speak these pieces.



Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like the last part....thanking the one who had injured you so for making you a poetry soldier. Letting all of your emotions come out into the tapping of your keyboard.....you standing tall - him cowering! Fantastic!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! This is just plain amazing here, Wonderful metaphors used in this write.

Crisp words escape their lips despite
speaking of stale moments.
She recites her rhyme,
pouring out her wealth to desperate souls,
being a victim of poverty so long
her stomach ached with hunger for love,
scraping her identity off the ground like
handouts she expressed herself freely...

I love these words here, this is a most amazing write here, I can feel the emotion
you written in this. wonderful write.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Just read this again chica. Still a great piece. Noticed to minor typos that need fixing. Near the beginning of the second stanza, the word "valley's" doesn't need and apostrophe in it. Second, this line:
"They all cheer, they want to her to pour".

Take out that first "to".

Still loving it. Kudos again.



Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Awe this is amazing... the journey of self discovery always starts at home for your roots are what feed your soul... and when you start to wither from love's starvation it's your roots that will once again revive you... this is deep and intense but full of heartfelt emotion.

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

"to the once sheltered woman who lived
inside her...
who had been cracked open...
spilling her yolk, which was devoured with
voracity, and then spit out." ....WOW

There are so many lines that really grab me in this poem. I'm not very good at writing reviews on poetry at all. But I will say that this is one of the best poems that I've read in a long time!
I would have to use the words Awesome, Brilliant, Powerful and Humbling.

Ed


Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I am speechless after reading this. You rocked this out! This is BY FAR, YOUR VERY BEST!!!!!

The entire poem is wonderful, your words flow showing so much strength. There is so much deep meaning all over this page.

Good job, Kena. I love this poem!

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I knew I had seen your work. The first I tried to review, I already had. This is a very complex poem, not one you can skim over. So many images, and powerful lines. You filled this with passion. I bet it made for a good public read. I may have gotten lost in a few places, but I caught up. Powerful piece, especially to read aloud. Rain..

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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