Dreams

On a shore of silken powdery sand
I stand beside him
for he has carried me here
...from our home planet

 On this voyage, he has brought me
...past the moon
...and beyond the stars

 He smiled and said, come love
...I will show you a new world
I will make all your dreams come true!

Reviews

[R Smith]

A love story from the stars, great idea Sunprincess, it makes a change from death and destruction in space, the first line creates a dream and carries it to the very end where dreams come true, a write of passion in the lonely void of space, bravo Sunprincess :)

[sunprincess]

............thank you Richard :) ★

[Pankaj Mandal]

nice one . love and the bliss of nature..together !!

[Latifa]

On a shore of silken powdery sand
I like this line a lot.

[sunprincess]

............thank you Latifa :) ★

[wordman]

come,i will make all your dreams come true,a sweet write

[sunprincess]

...............thank you wordman :) ★

[wordman]

you are welcome sun princess

[Sami Khalil]

"make all your dreams come true!"

So true. Keep the dreams alive, nourish them and make them come true. Excellent...:)..................

[sunprincess]

............thank you Sami :) ★

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. .......:)............

[....................]

Love can take us anywhere the heart desires...one kiss and the world around us vanishes...it's a wonderful promise...well-done :)

[sunprincess]

.............thank you F.T. :) ★

[Perkele.7885]

I like this poem. There is promise here. It is a bit simplistic. There is a potential story to be written here!

[sunprincess]

............thank you Perkele :) ★

[sinNsincerity]

Nicely written, I like how subtle it is.

[sunprincess]

...........thank you so much sin in sincerity :) ★

[Valentine]

Lovely, something like the promises in young love when all in life seems possible. Valentine

[sunprincess]

........thank you Valentine, and true I agree with you ★