Chalice of the Void

Chalice of the Void

A Poem by Michael Rize
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Sensuous yet apocryphal

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Vivid dreams of spasmodic swirls
Swarms my horrid thoughts
Of green acres passed by
Under black clouds of impending doom
Gloom the air of inhaled mist
Pierced only by the bright stars
Of outlandish hopes in an alien landscape
Closed by minds of ignorant others
Sucking the elixir of life 
From a majestic planet to be
Embraced by technology and 
the onslaught of awaited change
To carry it by for the eons to come
Can whispers ring true?

© 2015 Michael Rize


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Marvelous piece with a deep meaning. Brilliant work and ideas.....it think the whispers are the only ones that ring the truth :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michael Rize

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much. You inspire me to post more.
This is absolutely beautiful. Incredible word use. So beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michael Rize

9 Years Ago

Thanks, Charlotte. I really appreciate your comment.

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Added on February 16, 2015
Last Updated on February 16, 2015
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