Sonnet 4 - Water

For my true love

To view you as though a river flowing

A tinkling creek singing its pure call

So true, it cleanses all impurities

Oh those who bathe in its watery falls

But so much more, you are the lands around

Quenching the thirst of a drought too long felt

You are the rain that soaked the dried out grounds

Relieving the cough from a weary soul’s throat

It seem to over flow, drowning the place

Too long away, there is naught but water

Time trying to fade out your loving grace

Despite how we long to be together

But, Time shall never pull quite hard enough

For through all of this, we are still in love

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I like the way you used the water to make your point. Nice flow of thoughts led the reader to a very good ending. Love survive good and hard times. If we are lucky. It will get stronger. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Half Dream]

This is such a brilliant write. I really enjoyed reading this. :)

[wordwarrior]

I love your last couplet. It ties the whole poem together and gives such a positive feel to the ups and downs of love. The metaphor is lovely and expresses how love changes and grows, through good and bad times.
I enjoyed reading this.