Little bird told me...

Little bird told me...

A Poem by Susan Capozzi
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love poetry

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Shall tell, I heard
A little bird
Sing sweetly my life's song 
Forthcoming's blessed 
He did attest 
"Love for me will belong!" 

Life's journey glows 
Good Lord, bestows 
Bright gift upon my heart 
What hardship brings 
Gallant soul sings 
 Forging our brand new start 

Then joy abounds 
Delight resounds 
Of wonder and surprise 
True tender love 
(sent from above) 
Was little bird's reprise 

Begged, tell me more! 
Will he adore 
And hold me everyday? 
Shall tell, that bird 
Said not a word 
But winked and flew away. 




© 2017 Susan Capozzi



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beautiful, lovely and touching. clever ending. sometimes words are not necessary in love, especially from above. :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


Susan  Capozzi

4 Months Ago

Thanks Pete...this was part of a "little Bird" series I did. :-)
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Zoe
The very last part, where the bird winks and flies away, you made it look so sweet. I could see that happening in front of my eyes. Such a wonderful poem!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Susan  Capozzi

8 Months Ago

:-) Thank you for reading and for the sweet review!!!
Zoe

8 Months Ago

Most welcome
I like the gallant tone of this.. :) Great work!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Susan  Capozzi

10 Months Ago

Thank you very much!!
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10 Months Ago

Your welcome:)
Goodness-ME!
What's one to say, Susan, when such enthrallment has their breath in its grasp?
From presentation to flow as warm and sweet as honey, you've caressed the senses of all whom come to read and be blessed by such heavenly wonderment from the depths of your effulgent mind, heart, and soul ... whew, I'm swept!
Picture embraces, ambiance of your words captivate, and ... well, I could write a book on the effects of this one, Dear Lady-Poet.

Thank you ever-so warmly! ⁓ Richard :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Richard

10 Months Ago

I'm holding onto a limb! ; )
Susan  Capozzi

10 Months Ago

Good.. silly guy. And if i have too...I'll catch you.. couldn't you just see that? lol...me running .. read more
Richard

10 Months Ago

A smile-worthy vision, indeed! 😃
Your words embody so much feeling. I feel that sweet ache.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Susan  Capozzi

10 Months Ago

:-) That's exactly what I what a reader to do..feel. Thanks again for another review!!
...it's beautiful and lyrical, Susan. All tied up with a little tug of the heart!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Susan  Capozzi

10 Months Ago

Thank you for the sweet review! I do appreciate it!

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