You Are Mine!

You Are Mine!

A Poem by Susan Capozzi
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Free verse

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You are mine!


Beauty …
comes when I rest,
the moment
I close my eyes.

Each breath taken, 
softly releasing … 
sweet whispers
of a sigh. 

While pleasing visions
meander through the
flowing meadows
of your love,
I lie upon
a billowed bed, 
warmed by mem'ries
of your touch.

Anticipation soars
into flight, 
longings lend
to desire …
like dreamers
wishing beneath stars, 
your passions
fuel my fire.

Oh,
in this moment,
rises such beauty,
when you float across
my mind;

sweet whispers
of a sigh,
knowing …

You are mine! 


© 2017 Susan Capozzi



Author's Note

Susan  Capozzi
My very first free Verse poetry. Thank you to Richard W. Jenkins for you continued support and encouragement! A very gifted poetic and very patient teacher! :-)

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You made me feel the beauty of your poem, and that is the soul purpose of poetry, right? The level of beauty shifted smoothly from one verse to another. Love the experience of reading it.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Susan  Capozzi

2 Months Ago

awethank you so much!!!
I love this! It flowed so well, each line kept me coming back for more.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Susan  Capozzi

6 Months Ago

Hey you! Thanks for the sweet review! :-)
Such a nice soft write of passion.. And nice way to tell your lover that you dream of them holding you and making love to them... Thanks for sharing the sweet write with us..

Posted 6 Months Ago


Susan  Capozzi

6 Months Ago

:-) Thanks for reading! I do appreciate it!
and you did a beautiful job on it,sweet memories

Posted 11 Months Ago


Susan  Capozzi

11 Months Ago

:-) Thank you!
 wordman

11 Months Ago

my pleasure
Echoes of remembrance and a mind pic of romance.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan  Capozzi

1 Year Ago

First free verse :-) Thank you for reading and reviewing for me this morning! I'm smiling! :-)
Chris

1 Year Ago

You earned the smile...
Gorgeous and mesmerizing to read and appreciate. Glad to stumble upon.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan  Capozzi

1 Year Ago

Thank you dear Sami! I'm smiling here :-)
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

You are welcome.
Me thinks you have a knack for the romantic as you once more fill to flowing a page full of blissful love spoken in words.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan  Capozzi

1 Year Ago

Such are the dreamers that look to the stars and wising :-) Thank you for yet another wonderful revi.. read more
Oh oh oh Susan your words dance so softly above the page as if they are floating into my being glowing light and tenderness into my heart, no one makes me forget everything but you it's like a magic spell has come over my senses and I am frozen in time with your poetry --- this is far beyond any words I have to describe how amazing I think you are - you must be very very filled with love for your man to have these kind of feelings, and for our teacher Richard he has taught you wonderfully … thank you! :)

HUGGS!
Sammi

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sammi

1 Year Ago

OMG what a heavenly beautiful picture Susan dear!!!
Sammi

1 Year Ago

'Stubborn' haha I think he was smart enough to see how wonderful your free verse poetry will be and .. read more
Susan  Capozzi

1 Year Ago

Sammi! Ya got me smiling again.
I's always a pleasure to read your poetry.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan  Capozzi

1 Year Ago

Aw Thank you so much!
Hummmm - sweet everything poetically emotional and mystical - loved it... :-)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Susan  Capozzi

1 Year Ago

Yummy review! Thank you :-)

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