Ricalai (Rik-uh-lay) An original form created by Richard W. Jenkins. Thank you Richard for teaching me this wonderful poetic form and allowing me to give it a try. :-) Thank you for all the encouragement and continued support. Thank you for being you!
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I love how the 1st and 4th verse rhyme and the 2nd, 3rd, and 5th verses rhyme with each other. With 5 verses, it has a song-like quality to it.
Posted 3 Weeks Ago
3 Weeks Ago
Well, thank you very much for reading and for the review! I do appreciate you taking the time to do .. read moreWell, thank you very much for reading and for the review! I do appreciate you taking the time to do so...if you are interested, check out my Author Notes...maybe give it a try! :-)
What is it about hands.. that picture is.. a monument to photography. It lingers as eyes travel your words.. in Picalai.. (that word trickles off the tongue!). ' .. Velvet touch, traced hinder-most, each lush sensation’s engrossed ... '
How thought provoking is that. Beautiful form, lovely words.
Hope my words mean just a little something to you... one can only hope to achieve some contact or another!
Posted 5 Months Ago
4 Weeks Ago
OMGOODNESS! I somehow missed this wonderful review!!! Thank you so very much!..
I find it so hard to write a sensual poem without becoming somewhat graphic. You weave it in effortlessly and make it just as salacious and yet romantic.
An awesome read.
Posted 6 Months Ago
6 Months Ago
Yes, and that's the challenge I enjoy...I rather convey a feeling rather than get hung up on somewha.. read moreYes, and that's the challenge I enjoy...I rather convey a feeling rather than get hung up on somewhat more 'colorful" words :-) thanks for reading and for another wonderful review! I truly do appreciate you taking the time to express your thoughts of my writings. :-)
Eloquent, elegant and sensual all in one night of love Susan, is quite an achievement. Lovely, silky and poetic to a tee. Richard is turning out many disciples lol!
Posted 6 Months Ago
6 Months Ago
Thank you for reading and for this review! Yes, Richard is an amazing teacher and I appreciate learn.. read moreThank you for reading and for this review! Yes, Richard is an amazing teacher and I appreciate learning these differnet forms. :-)