Lush, Sultry Night

Lush, Sultry Night

A Poem by Susan Capozzi
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Cool breeze, soft touch, lush sultry night,  
rest memories 'neath moon-kissed lips. 
Hot, growing passions take to flight; 
desires embraced whilst warm dew ~ drips.  
 
Rest memories 'neath moon-kissed lips, 
sweet essence lingers -- restless sighs. 
Desires embraced, whilst warm dew ~ drips. 
eternal love bears no disguise.  
 
Sweet essence lingers -- restless sighs … 
gentle fingertips trace my spine. 
Eternal love bears no disguise; 
slight shivers quicken ~ so divine! 
 
Gentle fingertips trace my spine, 
shall not resist such boyish charms. 
Slight shivers quicken ~ so divine, 
wrapped tightly in my lover's arms.  
 
Then, joining bodies, hearts ’n souls … 
hot, growing passions take to flight. 
Held breath exhaled, pure bliss extols … 
cool breeze, soft touch, lush sultry night.




© 2018 Susan Capozzi



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This makes me feel like two teenage lovers having sex on a summer night and there love is coming into full fruition. Lovely, elegant and an amazing read!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Susan  Capozzi

2 Months Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I do appreciate it :-)
Gorgeous read, enjoyed :) x

Posted 4 Months Ago


Susan  Capozzi

3 Months Ago

Thank you ! I'm glad you enjoyed this little piece and I appreciate the review! :-)
sweet poem of passion,loved the image and the imagery

Posted 5 Months Ago


Susan  Capozzi

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much! I appreciate the kind review! :-)
 wordman

5 Months Ago

my pleasure
This is one of the most beautiful parts of being alive sometimes. Your writing is admirable.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Susan  Capozzi

5 Months Ago

Looks who's here!!! thanks for stopping by with this awesome review!
This reminds me of a piece of glorious music, bars and chords repeated as if in ripple time rather than specific structure. You've captured bliss as if ebbing and flowing in sweet succession.. A beautiful anthem written in words!!?

Posted 5 Months Ago


Susan  Capozzi

5 Months Ago

:-) awww Thanks Dear!
emmajoy

5 Months Ago

Should have added: incredibly warm as warm!!
Susan  Capozzi

5 Months Ago

you are too kind. :-)
Love the respective use of stanzas within the structure of the writes - like waves of highlighted passion! A melding of spirits poetically embracing - wonderful! :-)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Susan  Capozzi

5 Months Ago

Hey you! Thanks for stopping by and leaving this wonderful review!!
The elegance and eloquence of this are at such a heightened level of euphoria. Beautiful form and execution, Susan!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Susan  Capozzi

6 Months Ago

:-) Thank you for the great review! I'm smiling!.
susan,


Experience irrigates the imagination and the flowers are as above..

great attempt indeed.................


carry on

mp

Posted 6 Months Ago


I remember some moments like this.. Very passionate write

Posted 6 Months Ago


Susan  Capozzi

6 Months Ago

:-) thank you very much! I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.
Was a soft sweet read. AND you followed the form well.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Susan  Capozzi

6 Months Ago

:-) I have a GREAT teacher...he won't let me budge from proper form. Thanks for the review!! I appre.. read more

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