Mosaic of Blues

FreeVerse

Ahhh, that I could live

in a daydream's

deepest yearnings' release,

ride bright shooting stars

to where you are,

savoring long-awaited

... embraces.

Oh, how ...

love's joyous tears would well,

bursting forth

in pure crystal streams ...

setting-aglow merging souls,

as Heaven's

blushing deities exclaim!

True hearts ...

bond in embrace

now 'n forevermore;

holding firm your hand in mine;

together, soar far above,

midst softest mosaic of blues.

Till ...

finding there, a solitary star,

two lover's at peace ~ rest.

Twinkling lights abound

between strong arms,

Luna beams warmly tonight ...

with you.

From star-glazed eyes,

lovelight aligned cascades;

for, seldom is known

a heart so true !

Mosaic of blues.

Final farewell ...

now, venturing onward,

relinquishing daydream rendezvous'.

Bestowing visions ...

arousing possibilities,

suddenly ...

my world gleams

brightly clear ~ to a soft

mosaic of blues.

Author's Note

Edits courtesy of Richard W. Jenkins.

Reviews

[Lisasview]

Oh my and now a second one
Yes Richard is perfect in edits!!!
And learning…
Again I love your image and your fabulous poem dear Susan

[Susan 🦋]

:) thank you Lisa!

[Lisasview]

You are most welcome

[willweb]

In the midst of winter, springtime finds me as I read your poem today. I feel warm sunlight and float on the sweetest scents that surround me. Your pome is beautiful. It always amazes me how people can paint with words and create such beautiful portraits and landscapes. Really nice Susan

[Susan 🦋]

Oops! Missed your wonderful review!! Thank you Will!😊

[barleygirl]

Your poem has multiple meanings . . . this could be about a lover who's distant or one that's no longer living . . . mosaic of blue (great art) symbolizes "holding the pieces together" while feeling blue, an image packed with meaning. Such a well-crafted central idea, it drives the rest of your poem strongly (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Susan 🦋]

Awww Thank you Margie for yet again a lovely review!

[M.E.Lyle]

This is wonderful, and daydreams are too. What would life be without them.
There are a few poets on this site that are truly great. You are one of them.
The thing that's so nice about free style is, it doesn't have to be quite so structured. I am not a very structured person, more chaotic, I am.

[Susan 🦋]

OMGoodness! Thank you for such a great review!! I really do appreciate it! This a a rare free verse from me...I am quite happy you enjoyed it :-)

[andrew mitchell]

What a lovely read. You grace the page very well in free verse.

[Susan 🦋]

A very rare free verese LOL...Aw Thanks for reading, again.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

An amalgamation of delight and lust and power, a most provocative piece, well done, good read.

[Susan 🦋]

Thank you kindly! :-)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Susan... it seems like a Brahms Lullaby for Lovers.
Perhaps sailing on the Ocean blue where Seagulls dance freely.
You have captured the chimes when the wind blows delicately
where blue petals float endlessly on the melodies of sweet love
touching the heart strings of violins. truly, Pat

[Susan 🦋]

What a lovely review!!! Thank you kindly for taking the time to read. I do appreciate it :-)

[Einstein Noodle]

what a lovely read ..so gently romantic to the max .. only in a day dream eh!? but i do recall a time of youth that knew such a thing existed ;) and though the dreaming must come back to earth sooner or later .. i would not trade off the experience for anything ... as rock hard as reality is ... and set against a mosaic of blues is dynamite says i ... i love it! blues born from pain and survival ... the mosaic hints of it .. as your dreamer has only just begun .. good on you for this free verse ;) the one word interludes and pausing breath ... nice read .. glad i did not miss it!
E.

[Susan 🦋]

Ahh you found a rare free verse from me! Loving your thoughts on this..Thank you so much!!

[Einstein Noodle]

as you found a rare sonnet of mine ;))))))))))))))))))

[Susan 🦋]

yep and I really like it

[poetgurl]

Ever so lovely and i could feel a certain sweetness flow out, This is wonderful and ever so beautiful.

[Susan 🦋]

Thank you for reading and leaving me such kind words!

[Tate Morgan]

Your heart rings true You are a romantic for sure.there is an innocence about you that i find so sweet. The world is your oyster.

[Susan 🦋]

Tate!... ( apologies for such a late reply) I'm reading this review and just smiling... see? :-))))))))))))))))))

[Tate Morgan]

All is well I understand completely