Take Me ~

Take Me ~

A Poem by Susan


Take Me!


Strong hands

softly caress along ...

surround in wanting embrace,

oh-MY!


Commands,

whisp'ring sighs ~ sweet love's song;

'pon every garment ... unlace;

let fly!


Our plans’

hot passions naught prolong.

Quick! Close the door,  just in case …

outcry!

© 2019 Susan


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Author's Note

Susan
STEPLADDER
an original poetic form created by:
Robert "Bad Bunny" Trakofler ©2019

A brilliant form, worthy of the most skilled writer’s efforts,
Stepladder is composed of 3 Quatrain verses minimum.
Line counts are: 2/6/7/2, 2/6/7/2, 2/6/7/2, etc.
Rhyme scheme is: a,b,c,d a,b,c,d a,b,c,d

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Yee-doggies, Susan 🌻
You really took Bad Bunny's form and made it sing and dance with warmth and sweet sensuality, spot-on rhymes, excellent imagery, and perfect counts, all in powerful scintillation to the senses … I know he's gonna love it, too, just as I do.
Isn't his Stepladder form a wonderful challenge and loads of fun to compose in. It's the most original and entertaining form I've come across in a long time, and it's contemporary to the hilt … what a picture choice, too, to set the ohhh-so tantalizing mood. ; )

Ya really done super good, Lady Poet … a big HUG to You! ⁓ Richard 🍃

Posted 1 Week Ago


Susan

1 Week Ago

Aw thank you Richard for this awesome review. As always, much appreciated. THANK YOU for introducing.. read more
not a big "form" fan...but i like this one...the way it was put together created a nice momentum....
and it is sensual without being blatant...it suggests...
and we feel it.
nicely done, Susan,
j.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Susan

1 Week Ago

Thank you!!! Just having a little fun with "Bad Bunny's" new form... hope all is well with you.
I love the hands image! The unfolding of your hands is delicious Susan it sends a wave of tingle to my tongue as I read your lines aloud. You caressed the form with a most sensuous lovely voice Susan

Posted 1 Week Ago


Susan

6 Days Ago

Thank you for this lovely review! I so enjoyed working with your form! Ah yes! that image truly does.. read more

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